【考研英语试题写作】2013年英语一作文试题
2013年英语一作文试题 Directions: Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) 参考范文： Recently, there has been a growing concern among the public over the topic of the choice after graduation. As is described in the picture, a group of graduates are facing various roads to go, such as searching for jobs, pursuing further study, going abroad and becoming entrepreneurs. The picture intends to convey us that, as adults, college graduates have to make their own decisions about future life. After graduation, college students should choose future life based on their own realities and dreams. For those, who are eager to become economically independent and to put into practice what they have learned in college, taking a job or doing poineering work may be satisfying and rewarding. Getting established as a bread-winner after graduation is their main desire. By contrast, others who want to take advantage of the favorable conditions in college, however, ought to try to enroll in graduate programs inside or outside. For them, a Master's degree or even a Doctoral degree represents a much more ambitious goal than a bachelor's degree, because they cherish lifetime success and interest more in academic achievements than money. It is sensible that we should take a rational attitude towards the decisive choice. For the part of my own, getting a higher degree abroad has long been my dream. I’m a strong believer that one should do more research and learn more while he or she is still young.
【考研英语试题写作】2011年英语一作文试题
2011年英语一作文试题 Direction： Write an essay of 160-200words based on the following drawing .In your essay ,you should 1) describe the drawing briefly 2) explain its intended measing and 3) give your comments You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.(20points) 参考范文： Our surroundings are being polluted fast and man's present efforts can not prevent it. Time is bringing us more people, and more people will bring us more industry, more cars, larger cities and the growing use of man-made materials. What can explain and solve this problem? The fact is that pollution is caused by man -- by his desire for a modern way of life. We make "increasing industrialization" our chief aim.So we are often ready to offer everything: clean air, pure water, good food, our health and the future of our children.There is a constant flow of people from the countryside into the cities, eager for the benefits of our modern society. But as our technological achievements have grown in the last twentyyears, pollution has become a serious problem. Isn't it time we stopped to ask ourselves where we are going-- and why? It makes one think of the story about the airline pilot who told his passengers over the loudspeaker,"I've some good news and some bad news. The good news is that we're making rapid progress at 530 miles per hour. The bad news is that we're lost and don't know where we're going. " The sad fact is that this becomes a true story when speaking of our modern society. In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.
如何应对人口老龄化问题考研英语作文预测及范文
二孩政策英文
universal two-child policy -
二孩用英文怎么说
10
月
29
日，中共中央委员会正式发布了有关“全面二孩”政策的公告，将进一步
放松已经施行了
30
多年的计划生育政策
(family planning policy)
。
报告指出，“全面二孩政策
(universal two-child policy)
”将有效解决中国人口老
龄化的趋势。
2013
年，十八届三中全会决定施行“单独二孩”政策，但是效果并不尽如人意。
“全面二孩政策”的调整，希望解决未来有可能出现的劳动力短缺等问题。
据中国日报报道，我国老龄化程度不断加深，人口红利逐渐消失。所以，全面实
施二孩政策，是国家积极开展应对人口老龄化行动，促进人口均衡发展的一项举措。
China further relaxed its more than three-decade-old family planning policy,
according to astatement issued on Thursday (Oct 29) by the Communist Party of
China Central Committee.
Roughly 90 million Chinese couples will become eligible to have a second child.
It's the latest move by the authorities to finetune the family planning policy,
amid the nation'schanging demographics, which could lead to potential labor
shortages in the future if notaddressed.
The statement said the country's aging trend would be actively addressed by the
universal two-child policy, and that China would continue to stick to the family
planning policy as a basic Stateinterest.
In late 2013, the central government relaxed the family planning policy, allowing
couples to havea second child in situations where one spouse was an only child. As
of June, only 1.5 million of the11 million eligible couples had applied to have a
second child.
【
Key Points
】
“二孩”并不等于“二胎”。如果第一胎生的是双胞胎
(twins)
、三胞胎
(triplets)
、
四胞胎
(quadruplets)
、五胞胎
(quintuplets)
或龙凤胎
(pigeon pair)
，就不符合“二孩”
政策的要求。
本人2014年一月就要考研，希望能有了解考研英语的高人指点指点大作文，打个分,评价一下，谢谢了！
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写。
1.1
English is a internationally language which becomes importantly for modern world.
[副词错误] a internationally language不符合语法规范。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[名词错误] 冠词误用，建议将a internationaly改为an internationaly。
[词语错误] 词性误用，建议将internationally language改为international language。
[介词错误] 介词误用，建议将for modern world改为in modern world。
In China, English is took to be a foreigh language which many student choosed to learn.
[动词错误] 建议把 is took to 改成 is taken to/is taking to (Auxiliary Verb Agreement)
[名词错误] 单复数错误，请检查many student后的名词。
[拼写错误] foreigh 拼写错误，可替换选项为：foreign, freight, fore
[拼写错误] choosed 拼写错误，可替换选项为：chooses, choose, chased
[学习提示] 易混词汇: word, vocabulary, language, term, lexicon 均有“文字，词，语言”之意。
They begin to studying English at a early age.
[名词错误] 冠词误用，建议将a early改为an early。
[动词错误] 语法错误，建议将begin to+doing改为begin to+do。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: begin, start, commence, initiate, inaugurate 均含有“开始”之意。
They use at least one hour to learn English knowledges a day.
[搭配错误] 搭配不当，learn...knowledge在本族语中很少使用，建议修改。
[低频警示] english...knowledge 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[词语错误] 用词不当，建议将use sometime to...改为spend sometime doing...。
[学习提示] 易混词汇: knowledge, learning, scholarship 均有“知识，学问”之意。
[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire
In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese.
[词语错误] 用词不当，建议将superior than改为superior to。
[介词错误] 固定用法错误，建议将in addition to改为in addition。
In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language.
[连词错误] 语法错误，连接词though和but在同一个句子中不可同时使用。
[词语错误] 用词不当，建议将in me opinion 改为in my opinion 。
English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China.
[词语错误] 形容词词序错误，建议将English original works改为original English works。
Learning a country's culture, especially its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language.
[搭配错误] 搭配不当，建议将classic...culture改为classical... culture。
